Ka pai Amanuel. Awesome haiku and a great image to go with it. Thnks for being brave enough to read out your poem. Are you going to fill in the form to enter your poem? This form is here
Hello Amanuel! How are you? I hope that you are having a cool day today! It's Eden from Paroa School Whenua here! So my teacher, Miss Farr told us to chose five people and do a comment, but those five people had to have a poem on there blog. Maybe next time you could add a bit more in your poem, and maybe make it rhyme, and maybe you could do a captrion? Overall I think it's pretty good! Thanks, bye, Eden.
Ka pai Amanuel. Awesome haiku and a great image to go with it. Thnks for being brave enough to read out your poem. Are you going to fill in the form to enter your poem? This form is here
ReplyDeleteWow Amaneul, I really enjoyed your Haiku. I liked the way your were brave enough to read it aloud and post it on your blog.
ReplyDeleteHi my name I Taj I am from Paroa school. You did a great job but you should of put more culer on it and put a backrond on to.
ReplyDeleteHello Amanuel! How are you? I hope that you are having a cool day today! It's Eden from Paroa School Whenua here! So my teacher, Miss Farr told us to chose five people and do a comment, but those five people had to have a poem on there blog. Maybe next time you could add a bit more in your poem, and maybe make it rhyme, and maybe you could do a captrion? Overall I think it's pretty good! Thanks, bye, Eden.
ReplyDeleteHi I am Monica. I really like you poem. Maybe next time you could say it a bit louder.
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